阅读下面段文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。

Jim and Andy walked along the beach, looking for an adventure. They joked that some day they would find a talking fish or a mermaid or a bottle with a treasure map inside. So far they had only found shells and rocks and seaweed. Today though was different. The boys felt excited.

Sea crabs scampered on the rocks. Up one side and down the other. They were quick and lively. The tide didn’t seem to ever wash them away. Then Jim saw a fish. It was stranded on the beach, just flopping around.

“Can it talk?” Andy asked.

“It looks like any other fish,” Jim said. He picked it up gently and carried it to the water.

“Do you think it will grant us any wishes?” Andy laughed.

The boys watched as the silver fish sped off through the water. “No. Maybe next time.” Jim grinned.

As the two friends walked farther down the beach they came upon a bottle. It was green with a cork in the mouth.

“Our luck will change. Does it have a map inside or a genie?” joked Andy.

Andy reached down and picked up the bottle. He rubbed it. Nothing happened. He pulled on the cork. Nothing happened. He shook it. Nothing happened.

“Try the cork again. I bet the genie is waiting for us to release him. Or we’ll find a treasure map and have a real adventure,” Jim exclaimed.

Andy tugged again on the cork. He wiggled it back and forth. He twisted it around and around. Finally it popped out without breaking. Andy shook the bottle. Nothing came out. Looking inside he couldn’t see anything. Jim looked too and shook his head. Empty.

“It’s just an old wine bottle,” Jim complained. He grabbed the bottle and tossed it back onto the sand.

注意：

1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右；

2.至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语；

3.续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；

4.续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。

Para.1:

The bottle hit a rock and shattered into many pieces.

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Para.2:

Two boys ran after it.

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【答案】Paragraph 1：

The bottle hit a rock and shattered into many pieces. Both Andy and Jim gasped as they saw a long, silver key on the ground in the glass pieces. Then they looked at each other. Why didn’t it make any noise when they shook the bottle? Why didn’t they see it? Andy bent over to pick up the key. Suddenly the glass pieces came together to form a bottle again. The key was mysteriously back inside! And the bottle began rolling slowly toward the sea.

Paragraph 2：

Two boys ran after it. When they entered the sea, astonishingly they didn’t sink into the water but floated on the surface of it. They felt excited. They followed the bottle and then it stopped near an island where there was lots of treasure like diamonds and stones. “You can take as much as possible,” a voice came from the coast where a talking fish was swimming. It was the stranded fish that Jim saved and put back into the water.

【分析】

本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了Jim和Andy想在海边寻宝，挽救了一条搁浅的鱼，结果发现了一个瓶子，瓶子摔碎后他们发现里面有一把长长的银色钥匙，Andy弯腰想拾起钥匙。突然瓶子又完好如初，钥匙又回到里面了。他们跟着瓶子走，然后它在一个小岛附近停了下来，那儿有很多财宝——是那条搁浅的鱼来报恩的。

【详解】

1.段落续写：

①由第一段首句内容“瓶子撞在岩石上，摔得粉碎。”可知，第一段可描写瓶子碎了，Andy和Jim看见一把银钥匙掉在地上，Andy弯腰想拾起钥匙。突然瓶子又完好如初，钥匙又回到里面了。

②由第二段首句内容“两个男孩追着它跑。”可知，第二段可描写两个孩子跟着瓶子跑。他们进入海里时没有下沉而是漂浮在海上。他们感到很兴奋。瓶子把他们带到一个岛屿附近，那儿有很多财宝——是那条搁浅的鱼来报恩的。

2.续写线索：瓶子摔碎——发现银钥匙——捡起钥匙——瓶子完好如初——瓶子滚向大海——男孩追瓶子——来到财宝小岛——鱼的报恩

3.词汇激活

行为类

看见：see / spot

开始：begin/ start

进入：enter/ get into

情绪类

惊讶：astonishingly /surprisingly

激动：excited / thrilled

【点睛】

[高分句型1] Why didn’t it make any noise when they shook the bottle? (运用了when引导时间状语从句)

[高分句型2] They followed the bottle and then it stopped near an island where there was lots of treasure like diamonds and stones. (运用了where引导定语从句)