【读后续写指导】寓言故事七

来源:仪征中学 时间:2022-01-14
 

阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。续写的词数应为150左右。

Once upon a time there was a beautiful garden in which grew all sorts of fruits. Many beasts lived in the garden and they were permitted to eat the fruits whenever they wished. But they should observe one rule. They must make a low, polite bow to the fruit tree, call it by its name and say, “Please give me a taste of your fruit.” They had to be very careful to remember the tree’s correct name and not to forget to say “please”. It was also very important that they should remember not to be greedy. They must always leave plenty of fruits for other beasts who might pass that way, and to adorn (装饰) the tree itself and to furnish seeds so that other trees might grow. If they wished to eat apples, they had to say, “O, apple tree, O, apple tree, please give me a taste of your fruit.”

In one corner of the garden grew the most splendid tree of all. It was tall and beautiful and the rosy-cheeked fruit upon its wide spreading branches looked wonderfully tempting. No beast had ever tasted that fruit, for no beast could ever remember its name. In a tiny house near the edge of the garden lived a little old woman who knew the names of all the fruit trees in the garden. The beasts often went to her and asked the name of the wonderful fruit tree, but the tree was so distant from the tiny house of the little old woman that no beast could ever remember the long, hard name by the time he reached the fruit tree.

At last a monkey thought of a trick. He went to the tiny house of the little old woman, carrying his guitar under his arm. The old woman told him the long, hard name of the fruit tree, and he made up a little tune to it. He sang it over and over again all the way to the tree.

注意:

1.续写词数应为150左右;

2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。

At last he reached the corner of the garden where the wonderful fruit tree grew.

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The monkey returned from the tree and met other beasts in a garden party.

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【答案】At last he reached the corner of the garden where the wonderful fruit tree grew. It was easy for him to remember the name of the tree because he had turned it into a song, and he sang them over and over again so that he could not forget it. Only the clever monkey remembered the name of the tree. He bowed his head to the tree, politely called the tree’s name, and said: “please give me a taste of your fruit.” The tree generously handed him some fruit. The monkey succeeded in getting the fruit and was very happy.

The monkey returned from the tree and met other beasts in a garden party. The monkey, who was not greedy or selfish, was willing to share the delicious fruit with others. He carefully taught them to sing the name of the tree. Accompanied by a guitar, all the beasts politely asked the tree to give them some fruit. The fruit tree distributed its fruit generously. A cheer went up in the forest, and everyone praised the monkey for his wisdom and virtue. They all thanked the generous fruit tree and the wise monkey.

【分析】

本文以森林动物为线索展开,讲述了森林有个规则,动物们必须礼貌地说,并且能叫得出树的名字,才能吃到水果。有一棵果树又大又美,果实丰富,只是名字又长又难记,大家都记不住它的名字。聪明的猴子想办法记住树的名字,最后得到水果,并分享给大家的故事。

【详解】

1.段落续写:

由第一段首句内容最后,他来到了花园的角落,那里长着那棵奇异的果树。可知,第一段可描写猴子礼貌地请求,如愿以偿的得到水果,非常开心。
由第二段首句内容猴子从树上回来,在一次游园会上遇到了其他的兽类。可知,第二段可描写猴子和其他兽类分享水果,大家对猴子表示感谢和赞扬。
2.续写线索:请求——得到——开心——分享——感恩
3.词汇激活
行为类
①.得到:obtain/gain/get
②.分享:participate/share

情绪类
①.开心:be happy/feel joyful
②.感谢:showing one’s appreciation/thank sb/be grateful
【点睛】
[高分句型1]. The monkey, who was not greedy or selfish, was willing to share the delicious fruit with everyone. (由关系代词who引导的非限制性定语从句)
[高分句型2]. Accompanied by a guitar, the animals politely asked the tree to give them some fruit.  (过去分词作状语)

 
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