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阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
A young man went to visit the oldest and wisest man in the village for some advice on how he could become rich.
“Treasure is yours to be had :at the top of Yonder Mountain,” advised the wise old man as he pointed to a tall mountain in the distance.“You must travel on foot to the top of the mountain. There you will find riches beyond your belief. Once you leave the top of the mountain, whatever remains will be lost forever.”
The young man could hardly wait until the morning when he was to meet with the wise old man for final instructions. When he arrived at the wise old man"s home, he saw a long, thick log(原木) lying on the ground in front of the house.
“You must carry this log on your journey to the top of the mountain, and it is a necessary part of your journey. You must take it with you to the top of the mountain to claim your treasure,” explained the wise old man.
The young man was not pleased with this sudden surprise, but be respected the wise old man and as he lifted the long, heavy log onto his shoulders and struggled down the road towards the mountain, he realized that the trip would not be as easy as he thought.
After he was walking for a while, a woodsman came up to him and said, “It looks like that log is pretty heavy. Would you like me to cut some of it to make it lighter?”
The young man was very tired, so he said, “I suppose that a little bit cut off the end wouldn"t hurt.” And the woodsman cut two inches off the end.
A while later the young man met a farmer on his way back from the fields. And the farmer helped him cut another two inches off the end.
At the bottom of the mountain, the young man met up with a trapper(捕杀动物者) who helped him cut four more inches off the log.
注意: 1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右;
2.续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好。
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The young man continued to struggle to climb the mountain.
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The excited young man lay the log across the gap and discovered that it
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【答案】The young man continued to struggle to climb the mountain. Finally with great difficulty he arrived at the top where the young man saw the most beautiful treasure he had ever seen. What stood between him and his treasure was a wide opening in the earth which surrounded the mountain top. There was only one way to get across the opening. Now it became clear why the wise old man had given him this log to carry on his journey.
The excited young man lay the log across the gap and discovered that it was too short to cover the distance. Seeing the treasure that can"t be reached, how he regretted allowing the woodsman, the farmer and the trapper to cut eight inches off the long, heavy log. After many vain tries, he had to leave the top. As he turned to walk down to the mountain side, he looked back with tearful eyes and his treasure slowly disappeared. He came to the realization that whoever wants to achieve dreams must experience the struggles first.
【分析】
本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了一个年轻人去村里拜访最年长也是最聪明的人，向他请教怎样才能变得富有。聪明的老人指着远处的一座高山告诉年轻人，财宝就在山顶上。年轻人必须带着一根又长又粗的木头到达山顶，离开了山顶，财宝就会消失。年轻人开始艰难的旅途，一路上不同的人看到年轻人扛着沉重的木头，纷纷帮助年轻人切掉一小块，让年轻人的旅途变得更容易。
【详解】
1.段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“那个年轻人继续努力攀登那座山。”可知，第一段可描写年轻人开始爬山以及到达财富地的过程的。
②由第二段首句内容“这个激动的年轻人把圆木横放在空隙上，发现它……”可知，第二段可描写有关到达财富地的最后的描述。
2.续写线索：请教——指明——旅途——到达——感悟
3.词汇激活
行为类
①.到达：arrive/reach/get to
②.继续：carry on/continue
③.离开：leave/depart
情绪类
①.后悔：regret/ be regretful
【点睛】
[高分句型1]. Finally with great difficulty he arrived at the top where the young man saw the most beautiful treasure he had ever seen.（由关系副词where引导的定语从句）
[高分句型2]. What stood between him and his treasure was a wide opening in the earth which surrounded the mountain top.（由连接词what引导的主语从句）
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