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Every afternoon after school, the children used to go and play in the Giant"s garden.
It was a large lovely garden, with soft green grass, beautiful flowers, and peach trees whose pink pearly blossoms came out in spring, and that in autumn bore rich fruit. The birds sat in the trees and sang so sweetly. The children used to play games, crying and laughing.
“How happy we are here!” they cried to each other.
One day the selfish Giant came back. When he arrived, he saw the children playing in the garden.
“What are you doing here?” he cried loudly, and the children ran away.
“The garden is my own garden,” said the Giant. “I will allow nobody to play in it but myself.” So he built a high wall all around it, and put up a notice board reading, “No Entry!”
The poor children had nowhere to play. They tried to play on the road, but the road was very dusty and full of hard stones, so they did not like it. They used to wander around the high wall when their lessons were over, and talk about the beautiful garden inside. “How happy we were there!” they said to each other.
Then the spring came, and all over the country there were blossoms and birds. Only in the garden of the selfish Giant was it still winter. The birds did not care to sing in it as there were no children, and the trees forgot to blossom. When they saw the notice board they were so sorry for the children. The only ones who were pleased were the snow and the frost. “Spring has forgotten this garden,” they cried, “so we will live here all year round.” The snow covered up the grass, and the frost painted all the trees silver. Then they invited the cold north wind to stay with them.
“Why is the spring so late in coming?” said the selfish Giant, looking out of the window at his cold white garden. “I hope there will be a change in the weather.”
注意:
1. 续写词数应为150左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Paragraph 1:
One morning when he looked out of the window, the Giant saw a most wonderful sight.
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Paragraph 2:
And the Giant was touched by what he saw outside.
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【答案】Paragraph 1:
One morning when he looked out of the window, the Giant saw a most wonderful sight. In the corner, a piece of high wall got blown down by the north wind by accident. In came some children, with smiles on their faces and green branches in their hands. Wherever they went across the garden, the winter and frost were driven away, trees turning green and blossoms coming out. Surprisingly, with more children pouring into the garden, birds flew back, singing. It was obvious that it was not trees, nor flowers, nor birds but the children who brought again spring into this garden that was surrounded by the high wall.
Paragraph 2:
And the Giant was touched by what he saw outside. Not only did the garden hope for spring, but he himself was expecting the green world. Looking at the children playing in the garden, the Giant discovered the lovely and lively children were the spring. Then he became guilty about his selfish act. He thought to himself. “For days and months I have continued to keep the spring out of my garden. No, It’ s the garden of all.” Without hesitation, he broke the high wall and allowed the children in .
【分析】
本文以人物为线索展开,讲述了每天下午放学后,孩子们总是到巨人的花园里去玩耍,但是巨人很自私不允许他们来玩,春天来了,全国到处开花,到处鸟鸣。只有自私的巨人的花园里依然是冬天。后来巨人意识到孩子们可以驱散严冬,于是对自己的自私行为感到内疚,打破了高墙,让孩子们进来玩耍。
【详解】
1.段落续写:
①由第一段首句内容“一天早上,他向窗外望去,巨人看到了一个非常奇妙的景象。”可知,第一段可描写巨人看到窗外的景象是什么,他看到孩子们把春天重新带进了高墙环绕的花园里。
②由第二段首句内容“巨人被外面的景象所感动。”可知,第二段可描写被外面的景象感动后所采取的行动。
2.续写线索:巨人看到奇妙景象——孩子带来了春天——巨人感动——巨人内疚——巨人打破高墙让孩子们进来
3.词汇激活
行为类
赶走:drive away / drive off
涌入:pour into/ swarm into
感动:touch/ move
情绪类
极好的:wonderful / great
明显的:obvious / evident
【点睛】
[高分句型1] It was obvious that it was not trees, nor flowers, nor birds but the children who brought again spring into this garden that was surrounded by the high wall. (运用了who引导定语从句)
[高分句型2] Not only did the garden hope for spring, but he himself was expecting the green world. (运用了部分倒装)
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